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【雅思作文批改】2010年教育类雅思作文真题
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2010.05.08雅思作文考试真题
Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
雅思作文考生原文
I agree that children should study other subjects. Because, nowadays, every schools only teach children subjects which are beneficial to their future such as Maths, Chinese, and sicience. There are all important for children to improve their abilities, but they are not the whole. Sports and Music are also necessary very much.
In our country, students have a heavy bag-Chinese texts. If they want to achieve a high grade, they should try their best to study English, Chinese and so on. At the same time, other subjects are not important what they think. So they will be weak easier and lost a lot of great time. Studying in Sports class is a good process, During play basketball or football, you can be stronger and also meet many friends. They will make you feel not alone and be willing to face each trouble. And the music can make you relaxed and fell happy. It’s also a beneficial method to change their minds.
In my opinion, Chinese children need study other subjects. Whatever sports and music is easy or difficult, they all should study a lot because they can let them feel full and broad their eyes. As is known to us, education need use different useful means children can use their extra time to study other subjects, it just spend a little time and will give them a huge advantage. In conclusion, studying other subjects is important for children’s future too. Children study more useful skills, they will be succeed.
雅思作文批改 by 晟睿教育Angela令狐
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